Wednesday, November 28, 2007

Advantages of keeping oral hygiene

In our life, it is important to live for a long time. But to live a healthy and beautiful life is more important. There are many ways to keep health and beauty. Some people focus on exercise, diet, periodic medical check-up and plastic surgery for health and beauty. However, there is a method that is not considered important but can be very effective to enrich our life if we try doing continuously. That method is to keep oral hygiene. It simply begins with brushing teeth and goes up to preventive treatment and scaling at dental clinic. The reasons include improving one’s appearance, maintaining one’s health and saving time and money.

2 comments:

V.Thao said...

Hi Mira,
Your thesis statement has three reasons. Your introduction paragraph is good.

thao_dao said...

your introduction paragaraph is called a funnel introduction